Antique Pocket Watches

How would you say in Spanish?

If someone could help me translate what I'd be very grateful. I am not very good with the past tense. DOE slipped away and I realized that I was HOLDING my breath. ... We started to make our way back. On a high cliff in the way, we found a perfect view of the twinkling city and the breathtaking sunset. Pattern pink and blue entered the gold and orange sunset. It was truly a magical sight. We watched for about twenty minutes until the track was almost dark. We returned the car to my friend and he drove home. It was quite unique and certainly interesting day. It need not be the exact wording ... if something does not sound right, in Spanish, it can be changed =) Yes ... If theres someone who speaks Spanish and that they could help me I'd have

Here's another option: "La Cierva SE Alejo, suavemente, y me di cuenta de que había estado reteniendo mid respiración ... Emprendimos nuestro camino de regreso. En la cumbre de una steep SE Que elevaba al borde del Trillo, Vista descubrimos una perfecta of refulgent ciudad y del Ocaso deslumbrante. Estria rosada SE entretejían azules y con el y el dorado anaranjado del Sol Poniente. Era verdaderamente a panorama mágico. Nos quedamos mirándolo durante unos veinte minutos, hasta que el Trillo is oscureciera casi totalmente. Caminamos de vuelta al coche de mi novio, y él me condujo a casa. Aquel había sido un día verdaderamente único, y muy interesante, indudablemente.